_{I am torn between two yes or no options for the question of "Should I care more about the future than the present?" In my opinion it is quite difficult when we have to choose in this matter because I think we should develop the future but also should not forget the present values. Because with it, we have today, with it, can we develop the future? We will keep the memories, the past history pages and day by day let's preserve the good qualities or the days we are going through without forgetting them. And according to that should we thrive or build the country by what we can do now. In fact, if existing problems are not solved immediately, people may face more serious problems in the long term. On the other hand, one should remember the future and not give up. go to everything to enjoy the present. It is clear that people need to save some of their resources to prepare and implement future plans. Moreover, living towards the future can help people get out of the current depression. In summary, I think that both the future and the present play an important role in people's lives. So it's impossible to say which is more important, of course, we need to focus on both.}

        Time, including past, present and future, is a very precious and precious thing. But the important thing is to keep the past, present, and future, whichever is most precious. Many of you are confused between present and future, but in my opinion, I think the future is important and precious, but, we should pay more attention to the present than to the future. The present is what is happening before our eyes. I think it is better to focus on the present, because only then can we create a bright future for us. All activities of the present affect the future, if we do not care about the present, our future has no meaning. However, we should also take the time to care about our future. Please pay more attention in the present, because only then will we become successful in the future

including past \(\Rightarrow\) including the past

for us \(\Rightarrow\) for ourselves _{(This is more reasonable )}

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the most important think \(\Rightarrow\) the most important thing

to hold positive \(\Rightarrow\)  to hold a positive

on the present \(\Rightarrow\)  to the present

under this pressure people may \(\Rightarrow\)  under this pressure may

If people want ignore \(\Rightarrow\) If people want to ignore

for light future \(\Rightarrow\)for a bright future

in multinational's and \(\Rightarrow\) in multinational and

for a long-term sight \(\Rightarrow\) for the long-term

more environmental-friendly \(\Rightarrow\) more environmentally-friendly

on producing \(\Rightarrow\) in producing

to make sure the development \(\Rightarrow\) to ensure development

these risk in advance \(\Rightarrow\) these risks in advance

taking precautionary measures \(\Rightarrow\) take precautionary measures

come true \(\Rightarrow\) comes true

these government \(\Rightarrow\) these governments

compare \(\Rightarrow\) compared 

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People have different views about whether or not the future should be paid more attention than the present, while the rhythm of people’s life is speeding up. In my opinion, I totally disagree that tomorrow is more important and precious than today.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why the presence plays an essential part in the future. There is no doubt that the presence is the cause and effect of the future. It is clear that you will not succeed in the future without redoubling your current efforts. Take Thomas Edison, an American famous inventor and businessman, as an example, with his mom’s encouragement and his persistence, he has finally succeeded beyonds everyone’s hopes along with his greatest inventions although he did not go to school when he was knee – high to a grasshopper. Moreover, what we do today is the foundation of tomorrow. People often blame their current circumtances and just hope about the bright future without making efforts and rethinking what they have done.
In addition, tomorrow and today should be paid attention at the same time. People are soon finding themselves living in a new world which has always changed along with many different altered aspects of the society. Therefore, the future is the guidance of our living standards and social development. Besides, with the right attitude of the future and the present, people will not go astray, which is favourable to family and society. We never know what tomorrow will be or what it will take away, so we should take care of today as if it has been our final day or tomorrow of yesterday.
To sumary, it is not only necessary only for people to feel optimistic about the future, but also important to learn how to live the time being.

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circumtances \(\Rightarrow\) circumstances

attention at the same time \(\Rightarrow\) attention to at the same time

To sumary \(\Rightarrow\) To summary / To summarize

necessary only for people \(\Rightarrow\) necessary for people 

live the time being \(\Rightarrow\) live for the time being

Some mistake in your answer:

to concern more about the future days \(\Rightarrow\) to be more concerned about the future

by human \(\Rightarrow\) by humans

a low paid \(\Rightarrow\) a low pay

are likely \(\Rightarrow\) is likely

future \(\Rightarrow\) the future 

felt into the hands of the enemy \(\Rightarrow\) felt in the hands of the enemy

might be lack of raw material \(\Rightarrow\) might lack raw materials

do not solve effectively \(\Rightarrow\) does not effectively solve

live in the tomorrow \(\Rightarrow\) live tomorrow

the precious \(\Rightarrow\) the previous

every people \(\Rightarrow\) everyone

get accidents \(\Rightarrow\) get into accidents

any moments \(\Rightarrow\) any moment

People used to say: ''Don't let tomorrow do this, so do it today, so that you won't regret it later.'' so I chose to disagree.

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Some people believe that thinking about the future is more important than focusing on the present. I agree entirely with the statement that tomorrow is the most important think in life.

Thinking about the future can help people to hold positive attitude towards their lives. People, especially adults who pay more attention on the present, usually surrounding with unfinished tasks or variety of undone bills, under this pressure people may lose their temper easily and eventually leads to mental disease someday. If people want ignore these problems,then they should prepare blue plans for light future. Because of these plans, they can work enthusiastically and energetically. Once people plan for their future and clearly know what they really want to do, they will not feel confused anymore and it becomes easier to find the goal of life to live and work. Thus, I believe that people can work more effectively if they plan for short-term goals to meet.

Planning plays a significant role in multinational's and government's administration. It is necessary for leaders to think for a long-term sight. This is likely to help authorities to predict problems they may face someday in future and taking precautionary measures to handle these risk in advance. For instance, many governments are investing on producing more environmental-friendly products and preserving the stock of fuels, to make sure the development when fossil fuels are about to end in decades. When the crisis of energies come true, these government with future sight are likely to be less shocked compare to other governments who focus on temporary benefits. I, personally, will choose to focus on planning and not wasting time for plans.

To pen down, I believe that plans are of little importance but planning is essential. A clear vision and planning gives individuals and people a tremendous feeling of confidence and personal power.

In my opinion, we need to think about the future to take care of our future careers, but we can't ignore the present because we need the past and the present to have a future. There are many people who think: "We need to think about the future and ignore the present", but when the future comes near and becomes the present, you do not care and do not carry out the plans that have been planned. And continue to think about the future in vain. And if this continues, sooner or later you will lose everything.

I agree

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An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people in the contemporary world tend to focus on the future schedule rather than every moment at the present in their life. While I accept that this idea has a wide range of advantages, I believe that they should keep balance on the roles among the future and the present.
On the one hand, there are lots of accounts for encouraging individuals and society to concern more about the future days. Firstly, it is believed that with limited natural resources, the government should forecast the future and set up a plan for allocating it appropriately at the present. For example, if they do not measure the predicted time for forest to recover after being deployed by human, the future society might be lack of raw material for the paper industry. Furthermore, when each individual has their own long term goal, they are more likely to obtain a successful career. This is due to the fact that they are willing to ignore the comments of others to accept a job with a low paid at the present to acquire essential skills which are beneficial for their prospective employment.
On the other hand, the objectors support that people should still live for the present instead of being worried about the future. Obviously, if the government do not solve effectively problems in the current society such as starvation, domestic violence and terrorize, national security are likely to be put in danger. As a result, the national sovereignty will be felt into the hands of the enemy. In addition, future is something which is unpredicted exactly. A person might not have an opportunity to live in the tomorrow since they could get accidents or serious diseases and possible death occurs at any moments. This is the reason why they should enjoy every cheerful moment at the present.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that future plan is important for every people, but it is by no means they should ignore the precious value of the present.

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My dear, I see that you have very clear idea about what to say, which shows your coherent logical thinking.

The writing is well-organized with wide range of vocab and grammar; proper expression. Good job!

Thank you so much 

Dear, It's okay to answer with a few words or sentences; however, this is a writing request for you all to practice and the reward will be given to the best.

Therefore, it would be better and more acceptable if you wrote an essay or paragraph!

The writing is somehow quite subjective, good story teller

My recommendation for you is that you should write in a more objectivive style to make your article can influence more people's thought.

Good story teller

simple and clear expression

some minor errors, such as: "And continue to think about the future in vain" is lack of a subject.

vocab and grammar would be better if enriched

Dear, it's okay to answer with a few words; however, this is a writing request for you all to practice and the reward will be given to the best.

Therefore, it would be better and more acceptable if you wrote an essay or paragraph!

Azura, good job!