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I do not agree on computer learning. Although learning on computers, although helping learners to be more flexible in the fields of technology and creativity, there are still many negative aspects, not meeting the learning needs of students:
First, the quality of learning via the Internet cannot be compared with the traditional way of learning - which creates better interaction between students and teachers, managed, questioned, evaluated.
Second, online training can cause social isolation, because school is not only a place to learn but also a place where they come to socialize, make new friends and learn more communication experiences.
Third, this form creates an unevenness among localities. For children who have full learning equipment, have a sense of self-study and good family management, it works. Those children with difficult and unmanaged conditions will learn to cope.
While the benefits of learning online are obvious, it's important to remember that not all courses can be taught online. Therefore, online training should be seen as a complementary and extensible approach to classical forms of learning.
I half agree with this opinion. Why?
Schools have considered the second house where the children can study, play and join the extracurricular activities. In the school, the student can learn all the subject to expand their knowledge, do the exams... and specially, they can play with their friends. But sometime, study too much make they feel stress, yeah, I know this
Study on Internet has some advantages: they can learn by the photos, stories, songs... and they can stop when they want. But, it has many disadvantage. The children are too young to choose the information on Internet, which need to know or needn't. The Internet has many temptation like: games, cartoons... make they can't forcus on study if their parents won't monitoring them, use to much or to long time the electronic device can make their eyes have many problems.
With many reasons, the Internet just help 40 percents the children on study. I think schools have many advantage than study on Internet
I agree that life skills should be taught to young people at school along with traditional subjects like math and science.
First of all, we need to know what life skills are? Life skills are actions derived from things that people have been learned to respond effectively to situations or interact appropriately with those around them. So it is a very essential thing for life. For example, if we are injured, the life skill is to help us know how to bandage the wound or when there is a fire or an earthquake, it helps us to know how to escape. If we don't learn life skills, then we will have rude behavior in public places, from not knowing how to give room to the elderly to jostling each other when shopping, etc. Survival skills are the attitudes that manifest every day in life, it will be very difficult if we do not apply it on a regular basis to become good habits. But on the contrary, if we care and express ourselves in every situation, from greetings, dear ... to learning how to organize learning, playing and doing a good thing every day then everything will become simple, natural.
First of all, you should appreciate yourself, know how to equip yourself with skills to protect yourself. Then know how to respect the rules of society and take care of others. Just every day you do a good thing and do a good deed, even though simple and small, you will gradually equip yourself with skills in a safe and happy life!
We all know that life skills are very important, and my parents usually say that they are even more important than traditional subjects, such as maths, science, ... And in real life, there are many opinions about what things are more necessary. Therefore, I highly agree with this statement. And here are some reasons.
Firstly, life skills are really vital for all children, even after they graduate. Here are some of my definitions of life skills. From my point of view, any skill that is useful for one's life, such as tidying the room, cleaning the house, using a computer, etc..., can be a life skill. So, life skills are very important for each person's life. And if children study about life skills, after graduating school, they can be self-confident and they will successfully deal with every changes and challenges.
Secondly, with life skills, children can determine their life. As I have noted, small but necessary skills can be life skills, so if children don't know any skills or they can only do simple things, their living capital can be limited, so they must always have someone to help them. I think this is not really reasonable, because it means that children always depend on someone, and their lives will be very mechanical - they can't do what they want themselves.
In short, although traditional subjects provide children a large amount of knowledge, life skills must be taught together with those subjects. So, totally agree with the statement!
I will talk about my story, I met and made a wonderful friend before when I was in 6th grade. She was very pretty, did well in math and resembled me in every way. We used to have a lot of good memories together. But after one year of school, she moved to HCM city. I later looked at her profile, I saw a lot of beautiful pictures posted between us. No matter how far apart, we still contact each other and hang out together in the summer colors ... now she has gone abroad to study, but I still hope one day she will come find me .
Hello everyone, everyone must have had an interesting and memorable adventure in life. Me too, today I will tell you about an exciting adventure of mine. That day was Sunday, my family and I went to visit Bai Dinh pagoda - Ninh Binh. We got in the car at 3:30 a.m. and arrived around 6 o'clock. First we went to visit the temple, I learned that this place, more than 1000 years ago, was the temporary capital of the Dinh during the construction of Hoa Lu capital and then acted as one of The "four towns" of Hoa Lu capital. Also here, under the Ly dynasty, National Master Nguyen Minh Khong built a monkhood, used to cure diseases to save people, especially the cure for the cure of tigers for King Ly Than Tong. is one of the centers of Buddhism (worshiping Buddha), religion (worshiping Cao Son), worshiping Mother (mother Lieu Hanh). After that, my family and I went into the caves, of course we got a lot of good memories. After visiting the pagoda, we went to visit Trang An river and saw in the bottom of the small boat, the scene was very romantic. The feeling of being in nature, listening to wild birds, not having to worry about work or study, is so enjoyable. Going deep will have to paddle through shimmering stalactites caves, with many different shapes. Until about 5 pm, we returned home. This tour will leave me a lot of joy and happiness. I will never forget it.
Dear my friend!
As you know that since the outbreak of Covid, we have suffered great consequences and many people have suffered losses to their lives and many other things !! In my country, the influence of Covid-19 is not at all light, when I translated Covid to my city, I was very worried and impatient. The government has told and advised people not to go out, and wear masks ... Then then we started to be more careful when going out, to wear masks, That made me very is annoying because it was not very comfortable and can be said that it messed up my life and everyone in the country, and I had to learn through Zoom, after all that time I found it ineffective because studying on Zoom makes me not very focused and makes the lesson difficult to understand for me, what I tell you is true and if possible I want to advise everyone to keep health because we still have to fight this epidemic is quite long and everyone should follow all the rules that the government, everyone has set out to repel this epidemic.
I hope I will speak with you soon !!
Dear my friend!
Surely you also know about the Covid 19 epidemic and its heavy effects, right? To be honest, in Vietnam, we are not affected much by the pandemic, but we are also aware of its danger, so we take precautions by wearing masks and hand washing antiseptic. But recently, in Hai Duong, there were cases of infection in the community, and gradually, more and more cases of infections appeared, and more and more people were F1, F2 (people in contact with Covid 19 infected people.) more. Not only that, the epidemic broke out on the occasion of the Lunar New Year, so we must be more conscious of preventing the spread of epidemic. Students must study online, workers struggle on difficult days, and doctors work day and night to fight the epidemic. Even so, there are still some people who are unconscious and take advantage of it to do bad things. Bad deeds deserve condemnation and good deeds deserve praise. So, let's join hands together to repel translation, so that our life can return to normal as before ! Let's fight off a terrifying plague together !
Hope we will have a chance to talk longer! See you again !
Thank you very much!
For good or bad, computers are now part of our daily life. With the price of a small home computer now as low as $50, experts predict that before long all schools and businesses and most families in the richer parts of the world will own a computer of some kind. Among general public, computers arouse strong feelings. People either love them or hate them.
The computer-lovers talk about how useful computer can be in business, in education and in the home. Apart from all games, you can do on them, your accounts on them, learns languages from them, write letters on them and in some places even do your shopping with them. Computers, they say will also bring more leisure, as more and more unpleasant jobs are taken over by computerized robots
The latter, on the other hand, argue that computers bring not leisure but unemployment. They worry, too that people who spend all the time talking to computers will forget how to talk to each other. Their biggest fear is that computers may eventually take over from human being altogether
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To many people, their friends are the most important in their life. Really good friends always (1) have/give/share joys and sorrows with you and never turn their backs on you. Your best friend ,ay be someone you have known all your life or someonen you have grown (2) up/in/through with.
There are all sorts of things that can bring about this special relationship. It may be the result of enjoying the same activitives and sharing experiences. Most of us have met someone that we have immediately felt relaxed with as if we had known them for ages. (3) So/However/Although, it really takes you years to get to know someone well (4) enough/too/such to consider your best friend.
To the majority of us, this is someone we trust completely and (5) which/who/whom understands us better than anyone else. It's the person you can tell him or her your most intimate secrets.
There are complaints that bad news overwhelms our television. Some people think that television news should be a mixture of good and bad news. I absolutely support the idea.
First of all, it is understandable that the majority of television news being reported is bad news, such as: wars, famines, accidents and crime. There is a saying: Joy is easy to forget and sadness is easy to remember. The bad news often disturbs us and makes us curious. The more views from the audience, the more profitable the media organizations are.
However, in terms of psychological and medical concerns, if people are frequently exposed to bad news, they will also be affected mentally, gradually they become over-anxious and suspicious. A more dangerous thing is a lack of faith in life. If so, it is getting more and more difficult for us to see good things than to see bad things.
While it is true that most of our media used to be bad news, it is undeniable that the attractiveness of many significant news programs like Loving Leaves (Cặp lá yêu thương - a volunteer program on VTV); news about anti-epidemic doctors who work day and night to protect societal health; ...
Sum up, I believe that in order to have a rich and meaningful life, we need to have a multi-dimensional perspective. Good news and bad news are both pieces of life and need to be harmonized in the media to bring an authentic, objective and appropriate view to audience.
It is thought by some people that there should be a mixture of good and bad news on television. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
The majority of television news being reported is bad news: wars, famines, accidents, and crime. It is obvious that bad news, by its nature, is appealing to people. Their attention can be achieved by broadcasting negative news. People want to know more about wars and criminal behaviors as opposed to peace and good deeds in their community.
However, it is undeniable that bad news have negative impact on people's lives. If the media publishes too much bad news, people will be left feeling hopeless and anxious. They can be stressed and under pressure after reading such type of news.
Thus, the news should report the good happening in the world alongside the bad. Good news such as stories about someone’s achievements, successful personalities, and positive contributions can encourage others to work hard. Some programs about building shelters for the homeless, donating clothes for the poor and so on, these should be shown on TV as well.
In brief, if the media establishes the balance between both types of news, the society will be harmonious and peaceful. This will prevent anxiety and insecurity among the viewers.
In contrast to people living before us, we have a real chance to see the most modern machines. And one of them is television. It is often used for watching news instead of telephone, newspaper, radio… What a convenient machine! However, some people think that TV news should be a mixture of good and bad news. I totally agree with this statement.
The reason for that statement is the most of TV news is bad news: wars, famines, accidents and crime. Some news that make us sympathize with difficult lives and develop our kindness, such as Transcaned Yourself program, African famine news,.... So, why do I think TV news need renewing?
Firstly, life is so modern now that anything should be diversified. Therefore, adding more good news to TV news is necessary. It absolutely can happen, so why don't we do it? It not only provides us with knowledge but also make us feel relaxed and entertain after a stressful working day.
Secondly, the good news will attract children instead of making them think that TV news is for adults. And then, they like watching TV news better than fastening their eyes on telephone.
Lastly, the bad news makes us have such a pessimistic view of life. So a mixture of good and bad news helps us feel optimistic and live actively. That is a good way to make our daily lives better.
In conclusion, bad news doesn’t affect us adversely, but in order to attract more audiences, TV news should be a mixture of good and bad news. It's essential for a morden life.
Television is one of the necessary devices to give people information. While it is claimed that news on television is a combination of positive and negative, I disagree with this idea. From my point of view, television totally gives us good reports.
it is true that television updates the latest news that helps people get information quickly. Updating information gives people chances to adjust their schedule and won't affect their life and working. As an evidence of this, when happening a hurricane, thanks to television people know the ways it moves, so that they have solutions to protect themselves and their family.
Moreover, telly shares good stories and behavior that make people live more happily. When watching these stories, you will be impacted deeply that may change your mind, thoughts,actions and attitudes. As an example, Cap la yeu thuong is a program telling about poor children needed help. We watch kind people on television and look up to them that can motivate us to do the same thing.
In conclusion, i am in favor of the idea that television is a source of good news. People should be aware of its advantage of giving the latest reports and change our behavior positively.
I think television news is both good and bad. Bad news like: war, famine, ... also needs to be brought up so that we can fully understand the situation of the people there, or can we rely on that news to call on everyone to support, or condemn certain issues. Good news like: kind things, the country is going up, or the covid-19 epidemic is being pushed back, ... we need to be raised so that everyone can feel secure, love life, and be happier.
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I think television news is better than bad. The bad news: war, famine, traffic accident, natural disaster, ... but it gives us more information so everyone can help with those things together. The good news such as: the covid-19 translation is being overcome, or our country's economy is going up, ... makes people feel more secure, happy and love life. The good and the bad are inevitable in life and need to be brought up by the media to bring the most authentic and relevant view to life.
In my opinion, TV news is half good and the other half is bad, but bad news such as famine, accident, etc. should also be posted so that we can see clearly the difficult situation. In addition, we have other good news such as: disease is well controlled, global economy is recovering, ... We need to think about it. With such a positive, optimistic way, we will feel more relaxed.
Hôm nay là hết hạn rồi ạ? Có thể mở thêm 1 ngày nữa không cô ơi
Chị Vy ơi, cái câu cuối của đoạn áp chót dùng mệnh đề quan hệ luôn chứ ạ?
Lẽ ra thì em sẽ viết thêm 1 luận điểm về broaden knowledge, nhưng mà em không có thời gian :<
Em đã cố gắng paraphrase đề bài nên có thể nó hơi bị ngượng chưa được tự nhiên ạ. Với cả em thấy bài em cấu trúc dùng chưa đa dạng, từ vựng cũng chưa phong phú lắm.
Mong được cô nhận xét và góp ý thêm ạ
Hi Komorebi, after reading your article, I have some comments for you:
1. Content: Score 2 out of 3:
- addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others
- presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive
- presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear
2. Form: Score 2 out of 2: Form marks are given if the length is between 200 and 300 words you will be given two marks.
3. Development, structure and coherence: Score 1.5 out of 2
4. Grammar: Score 1 out of 2: Some grammatical error but without failure to communicate message. You should focus more on articles, pronoun usage, verb-subject agreement.
5. General linguistic range: Score 2 out of 2: The writer has the ability to express ideas with clarity and precision.
6. Vocabulary range: Score 1.5 out of 2: Wide variety of words, phrases, and idioms.
7. Spelling: Score 2 out of 2
Total: Score 12 out of 15
Wish you study well and have a good experience at hoc24.vn!
Hi Duong, after reading your article, I have some comments for you:
1. Content: Score 2 out of 3:
- addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others.
- presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive.
- but some may be inadequately developed/unclear.
2. Form: Score 2 out of 2: Form marks are given if the length is between 200 and 300 words you will be given two marks.
3. Development, structure and coherence: Score 1.5 out of 2
- arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression.
- uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical.
- may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately.
- presents a clear central topic within each paragraph.
4. Grammar: Score 1 out of 2:
- uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms.
- makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication.
5. General linguistic range: Score 2 out of 2: The writer has the ability to express ideas with clarity and precision.
6. Vocabulary range: Score 1 out of 2:
- uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task.
- attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy.
- makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication.
7. Spelling: Score 1 out of 2
Total: Score 10.5 out of 15
Wish you study well and have a good experience at hoc24.vn!
n contrast to people living before us, we have a real chance to see the most modern machines. And one of them is television. It is often used for watching news instead of telephone, newspaper, radio… What a convenient machine! However, some people think that TV news should be a mixture of good and bad news. I totally agree with this statement.
The reason for that statement is the most of TV news is bad news: wars, famines, accidents and crime. Some news that make us sympathize with difficult lives and develop our kindness, such as Transcaned Yourself program, African famine news,.... So, why do I think TV news need renewing?
Firstly, life is so modern now that anything should be diversified. Therefore, adding more good news to TV news is necessary. It absolutely can happen, so why don't we do it? It not only provides us with knowledge but also make us feel relaxed and entertain after a stressful working day.
Secondly, the good news will attract children instead of making them think that TV news is for adults. And then, they like watching TV news better than fastening their eyes on telephone.
Lastly, the bad news makes us have such a pessimistic view of life. So a mixture of good and bad news helps us feel optimistic and live actively. That is a good way to make our daily lives better.
In conclusion, bad news doesn’t affect us adversely, but in order to attract more audiences, TV news should be a mixture of good and bad news. It's essential for a morden life.
Hi "Silly Naivety", after reading your article, I have some comments for you:
1. Content: Score 2.5 out of 3:
- addresses all parts of the task
- presents a clear position throughout the response
- presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus
2. Form: Score 2 out of 2: Form marks are given if the length is between 200 and 300 words you will be given two marks.
3. Development, structure and coherence: Score 1.5 out of 2
- arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression.
- uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical.
- may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately.
- presents a clear central topic within each paragraph.
4. Grammar: Score 1 out of 2:
- uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms.
- makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication.
5. General linguistic range: Score 2 out of 2: The writer has the ability to express ideas with clarity and precision.
6. Vocabulary range: Score 1.5 out of 2:
- uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task.
- attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy.
- makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication.
7. Spelling: Score 2 out of 2
Total: Score 12.5 out of 15
Wish you study well and have a good experience at hoc24.vn!
In contrast to people living before us, we have a real chance to see the most modern machines. And one of them is television. It is often used for watching news instead of telephone, newspaper, radio… What a convenient machine! However, some people think that TV news should be a mixture of good and bad news. I totally agree with this statement.
The reason for that statement is the most of TV news is bad news: wars, famines, accidents and crime. Some news that make us sympathize with difficult lives and develop our kindness, such as Transcaned Yourself program, African famine news,.... So, why do I think TV news need renewing?
Firstly, life is so modern now that anything should be diversified. Therefore, adding more good news to TV news is necessary. It absolutely can happen, so why don't we do it? It not only provides us with knowledge but also make us feel relaxed and entertain after a stressful working day.
Secondly, the good news will attract children instead of making them think that TV news is for adults. And then, they like watching TV news better than fastening their eyes on telephone.
Lastly, the bad news makes us have such a pessimistic view of life. So a mixture of good and bad news helps us feel optimistic and live actively. That is a good way to make our daily lives better.
In conclusion, bad news doesn’t affect us adversely, but in order to attract more audiences, TV news should be a mixture of good and bad news. It's essential for a morden life.
Ddinhr luoon
Không đâu ạ :<
h em ms biết tên tiếng anh của e là Silly Naivety :)))) nãy nhìn cô chào mà không biết cô chào ai :v