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14 tháng 6 2021

 You did it wrong! You should write a paragraph of about 60 to 80 words, not list them out :v

14 tháng 6 2021

Ý này "Do not burn trees and do not kill trees " em nên viết thành " Do not cut down trees"

14 tháng 6 2021

Oh, the teacher doesn't say how many words, right ?

14 tháng 6 2021

            In recent years, Traffic congestion and pollution have increased significantly and become a major problem worldwide. Some people think that increasing petrol prices will solve such problems. Although it is possible that higher gas prices will solve traffic and pollution problems to a large extent, I completely disagree with this opinion. I believe that increasing the cost of petrol is not a viable solution that everyone can do. Although it can reduce the number of vehicles on the road, it brings many disadvantages or difficulties for people both physically and mentally. Increasing gasoline prices is only a matter of time. Because businesses know in advance, if the world gasoline price increases, they will be compensated by the State (or sooner or later people will also suffer because the State increases the price), and if the world price decreases, They still sell at a high price. People have witnessed too many times when the world gasoline price increases, the domestic gasoline price increases, but the opposite happens very rarely: the world gasoline price decreases while the domestic gasoline price remains stationary. Instead of increasing the price of gasoline. fuel, the government can take a number of other measures to effectively deal with this problem. First, corporate companies whose employees only require a computer to do their jobs should allow them to work from home at least 3-4 days a week. This will reduce the carbon footprint of commuters who go to work every day. Another solution is that governments should create new laws that limit the number of vehicles a household can own. This will limit unnecessary spending on new cars and motorbikes. Both of these solutions can have a positive impact on the environment while discouraging excessive vehicle use. Improving the frequency and reliability of public transport is another way to encourage private car use. A better solution is to find measures that will work in the long run. To illustrate, increased investment in alternative fuels and improved public transport are more effective measures than increasing gasoline prices. Traffic and pollution problems will not be solved until people start using public transport. For this reason, the government should provide cheap public transport and ban cars from the city center. In short, air pollution and traffic problems cannot be solved by increasing spending. fuel costs. Instead, the government should make public transport more reliable and promote work-from-home options to reduce people's need to travel.

14 tháng 6 2021

Spelling mistake:

motobikes \(\Rightarrow\) motorbikes

eletric bikes \(\Rightarrow\) electric bikes

14 tháng 6 2021

Vocabulary error:

petrol price \(\Rightarrow\) petrol prices

reduce pollutions effectively \(\Rightarrow\) reduce pollution effectively

 

14 tháng 6 2021

Here are some of my comments on your work:
- Slightly off topic.
- The problem of the topic has not been clearly stated.
- The essay is a bit short

17 tháng 6 2021

clear idea, task-achieved; I completely agree with Azura's suggestions for you.

One more thing, "To begin with" should be used at the beginning of your analysis!

17 tháng 6 2021

your writing is quite confusing with hesitations and thought-provoking expressions that are not argumentative but emotional, my dear!

17 tháng 6 2021

good essay!

If gasoline is increasing if you don't know how to use it, it will be polluted and the air will not be good and I disagree, and here are my solutions to protect the environment:
Plant many green trees
No littering
Pick up trash when you see it
No smoking and no littering vứt
Do not burn trees and do not kill trees
Do not harvest too much wood
Must know how to love green plants
Should clean up the roadside garbage to let the air fresh
should not pee in green trees and do heavy hygiene
Here are the ways you can solve to protect the environment, teachers tick

14 tháng 6 2021

đúng bài tủ của em 

14 tháng 6 2021

Traffic congestion and pollution are two pressing issues all over the world. As the majority of cars and motobikes are petrol driven, elevating petrol price can reduce their numbers on the roads, and as a result, help control traffic congestions and pollution to a great extent, I agree. Unlike the past, when only rich people could afford automobiles, a majority of car and motorbike owners, these days, are from middle-class families. Therefore, a higher fuel cost will affect their budget. Such surge in prices will increase the demand for public transportations which is by far the most efficient way to pull out the pollution. Moreover, such a price hike will make eco-friendly automobiles popular. For instance, electric cars or electric bikes can become a viable option for consumers. Although it cannot reduce traffic problems, it can reduce pollutions effectively. Other solutions can also be considered instead of upscaling petroleum price only. To begin with, the government can implement policies to restrict the number of cars per family can own, and also offer subsidies to citizens to purchase electric cars and eletric bikes. To conclude, increasing petrol price will open the doors for alternative options which can, directly and indirectly, combat both traffic and pollution problems.

14 tháng 6 2021

in recent years Vehicles are increasingly improved, leading to increasing environmental pollution, especially air pollution, which makes people aware of cancer, so the government has ordered an increase in oil prices. Therefore, it has made many people uncomfortable, especially shippers and taxis because it is difficult to make money during the epidemic but also increase the price of oil, I agree with you, shippers and taxis have made hard money. but now it's more miserable, but because of the survival of humanity, I agree with the issue of oil price increase, but I feel poor  for the shippers, taxi

so i agree

14 tháng 6 2021

Mình gõ nhanh quá nên thiếu bucminh

14 tháng 6 2021

P/S mong argentina vô địch copa america cho idol messi có danh hiệu quốc gia đầu tiên 

14 tháng 6 2021

But it's great vui

14 tháng 6 2021

chuyện SGK đou ông 

hứa mà chưa kể 

14 tháng 6 2021

Tối đi ok

14 tháng 6 2021

hứa hoài 

tối kiểu gì cx bảo '' hôm nay anh mệt nhắm , mai đi '' 

bucqua

14 tháng 6 2021

Phản bội VN :v

14 tháng 6 2021

17 tháng 6 2021

Thank you so much 😘

17 tháng 6 2021

Link: https://www.ielts-mentor.com/writing-sample/writing-task-2/1471-best-way-to-solve-growing-traffic-and-pollution-problems

17 tháng 6 2021

For a long time, television has been regarded as a saving means of entertainment and acquiring useful knowledge. However, besides the benefits mentioned above, it also brings a lot of harm because of the following reasons. First, watching TV takes up a lot of our time. I do not deny the benefits such as entertainment or education that it brings. However, instead of spending all the day just watching TV, we can do some useful works such as doing homework, helping mother to do housework. Through that, we can gather for ourselves a lot of soft skills and become closer to the other. Second, sitting too close to the TV screen will make harm affect on our health. Studies have shown that sitting near television will shorten our vision, in addition increase the risk of cardiovascular diseases and degeneration of the neck vertebrae ... These are the disadvantages that no one expects. Therefore, let's limit the amount of time spending watching TV and save that time doing other useful things.

 

17 tháng 6 2021

In recent years, due to the strong development of new advanced technologies, children in big cities have a great opportunity to be exposed to it from an early age. So most people assume that there are broad and serious aspects not only to education, but also to children's development. In my opinion, TV has an impact on both

On the one hand, I agree that watching too much is harmful to children's education and psychological development. Firstly, compared to other activities, children spend too much time on TV, leading to lack of learning. As a result, their learning can be reduced, or worse, they can be expelled from school. Second, greater involvement in inappropriate planning is associated with a number of negative effects on psychological development such as violence, depression, and autism. In addition, sitting in front of the TV for a long time can cause many dangerous diseases, such as obesity or myopia. This brings not only an economic burden to their families, but also an economic burden to society.

On the other hand, there is some undeniable evidence demonstrating the widespread benefits of television. I think so because the amount of knowledge in the 21st century comes not only from school or home, but also from digital devices like television or the Internet. For example, children can use documentaries or reality TV shows to identify different soft skills, such as problem-solving, communication, or survival skills. In addition, according to some scientific reports on TV, children can expand their knowledge to develop physically and mentally, for example, "remember to drink at least 2 liters of water a day to promote metabolism. metabolism” or “be careful when going out at night. Because it is possible to encounter some evil activities of society " Collectively, it has been proven that regular parental guidance is very beneficial for children to watch TV to gain more useful knowledge. for yourself.

22 tháng 2 2021

Earth where our human living on are the third planet in the Solar System. It carried almost 7 billions human beings, other billion life forms such as animal, trees or even bacteria. It was the best planet for human to live on where far enough to our Sun, so all life won't be frozen or close enough, so we won't be burned and dead. However, we are destroying it so badly and making it become difficult to live by releasing the harmful substances to environment. So far, Earth is still the best choice for human beings to live in this Milky Way.With the increasing of polution, food crisis, rising of Global Warming or any disarters which are out of human control,  it might be risky for the human life on Earth. Definitely it is necessary for human to find other planets to live in order to avoid human extinction which absolutely will be happening in the future.with the development of advanced technology, we might control the natural desarters. But, it will only happen in the future which we are unable to figure out. So, finding new planets for our next generation should be the first priority misson for current generation in order to keep the human values spreading endlessly.

It is true, that if present trends continue, it will become increasingly difficult to sustain human life on Earth. While I agree that it is vital to tackle this problem. I believe that expenditure on research for new planets to colonise should be given a low priority, and resources must be used to find other, more practical solutions.There are two major reasons why life on Earth is becoming more and more unsustainable. One obvious problem is the uncontrolled consumption of natural resources, which are being depleted as a result. For instance, the extraction of fossil fuels, such as coal, gas and oil to satisfy growing energy demands has serious environmental impacts, and these resources will eventually run out. Another concern is the rising level of pollution worldwide, of the land, the oceans and the air that we breathe. In India, for example, thousands of tons of industrial rubbish have been released illegally into rivers, killing aquatic life and contaminating drinking water.However, I would argue that the search for a new planet on which humans could survive is a waste of valuable resources. Firstly, a vast amount of funding would be required to finance such space exploration, with no guarantee of success. This money is needed now to improve health services globally and to provide better education for all. Secondly, financial resources should be used to develop advanced technologies that would be more environmentally- friendly and provide renew able energy. In the field of transport, to take a simple example, vehicles can now be converted to run on hydrogen or even waste cooking oil – as McDonald’s have done with their trucks.

In conclusion, I consider that the search for new planets on which to settle is a waste of time and resources, and efforts should be concentrated on living more sustainably here on Earth.

26 tháng 2 2017

Bài 3 :

1. Asia (châu Á)

2. Europe (châu Âu)

3. Africa (châu Phi)

4. North America (Bắc Mỹ)

5 South America (Nam Mỹ)

6. Australia (úc)

7 Antarctic (Nam Cực)

26 tháng 2 2017

Bài 4

a. continent : Asia, Africa

b. country: Sweden, the USA

c. cities: Nha Trang, Liverpool, Ha Noi, Amsterdam!

d. capital : Ha Noi, Amsterdam

e. place of interest : Ben Thanh Market, the Louvre

17 tháng 2 2023

1 villa

2 on an island

14 tháng 10 2023

A: What type of house do you think it is?

(Bạn nghĩ đó là kiểu nhà nào?)

B: I think it’s a villa.

(Tôi nghĩ đó là một biệt thự)

A: Where do you think the house is?

(Bạn nghĩ ngôi nhà ở đâu?)

B: I think it’s on an island.

(Tôi nghĩ nó ở trên một hòn đảo.)

1.I often use photo gallery, instagram, contacts, google meet,... a few other learning apps.

2.I'm usually interested in my learning app, or youtube because those are two popular and popular apps, and it gives me a lot of interest and newness.

3.to mention youtube.

4.Maybe still youtube and google meet because they are very useful and convenient. In this complicated time of translation, google meet helps us connect with each other more, and youtube will develop in many ways that are suitable with the times so that we can keep up with the present with countries around the world.

 

1 tháng 3 2022

1I used the Facebook app on my smartphone recently
2I am interested in entertainment applications such as watching movies, playing games, or social networks,...
3The first mobile app that I downloaded and tried was TikTok
4I want to use applications related to learning and looking up information effectively in the future

3 tháng 3 2021

The person I admire the most is my grandmother. She was the one who took care of me and my brother since childhood because my parents went to work very early and came home very late. She is a very capable housewife. She took good care of us. She often taught me difficult problems that I could not do and always reminded us to study. And I also admire her because she is a very hard worker. I hope I can learn from her more.

* P/s : I'm not good at English

3 tháng 3 2021

Everyone born in this life has a mother, because it is the mother who gave me this life. Me too, she is the most wonderful person for me, she gave me birth, grow up and live in the loving embrace of family. My mother is over 30 years old this year, she works very hard to sell fruit at the market. She gets up early in the morning to bring the goods to the market, until late at night to bring the goods. Home page. Because she often wakes up early, she looks very thin, has a dark complexion, and has a few wrinkles. Whenever I get off school, I go to the market to help my mother look after the goods.

23 tháng 2 2023

1. trek
2. wildlife
3. anniversary
4. digital nomad

25 tháng 11 2023

Hướng dẫn dịch

1. Đi một khoảng cách xa, đặc biệt là qua các ngọn đồi, núi và rừng - Trek

2. Những loài động vật và thực vật sống ở trong tự nhiên nhưng không phải thú cưng hay là những cây trồng ở nhà. - wildlife

3. Ngày mà một sự kiện diễn ra - anniversary 

4. Một người đi làm từ nơi này đến nơi khác, anh ấy/ cô ấy sử dụng máy tính hoặc những thiết bị công nghệ để làm việc - digital nomad   

14 tháng 10 2023

1. In the first picture, I can see a beautiful bookcase with many pens inside.

(Trong bức hình đầu tiên, tôi có thể thấy một hộp đựng sách rất đẹp với nhiều bút bên trong.)

In the second picture, I can see small trees inside coconut shells.

(Trong bức tranh thứ hai, tôi có thể nhìn thấy những cây nhỏ bên trong gáo dừa.)

In the third picture, I can see beautiful flower vases made from tins.

(Trong bức tranh thứ ba, tôi có thể thấy những lọ hoa xinh đẹp được làm từ hộp thiếc.)

2. These are beautiful flower vases made from old plastic bottles. We wash used water bottles and cut them into different shapes. We also cover them with old gift wraps. What do you think of our products?

(Đây là những lọ hoa xinh xắn được làm từ chai nhựa cũ. Chúng tôi rửa những chai nước đã qua sử dụng và cắt chúng thành nhiều hình dạng khác nhau. Chúng tôi cũng bọc chúng bằng những gói quà cũ. Bạn nghĩ gì về sản phẩm của chúng tôi?)

These are beautiful flower vases made from old plastic bottles. We wash used water bottles and cut them into different shapes. We also cover them with old gift wraps. What do you think of our products?

(Đây là những lọ hoa xinh xắn được làm từ chai nhựa cũ. Chúng tôi rửa những chai nước đã qua sử dụng và cắt chúng thành nhiều hình dạng khác nhau. Chúng tôi cũng bọc chúng bằng những gói quà cũ. Nghĩ gì về sản phẩm của chúng tôi?)