Last summer, I and my group spent our holiday at Vung Tau Beach. This is one of beautiful beaches in Viet Nam. It took two hours to take there.
We concentrated in bus station. At 5 A.M we started our trip by bus. Although I feel tired after two long hours but sea air made me re-excited.
Gradually, Bien Dong was in font of us. Bien Dong length 750 m with beautiful sea and form of entertainment is multiform.
We arrange our bags and after that we quickly swum in blue sea. The weather was very nice. The golden light spread in white sand. Tiny waves crashing onto the beach. It is suitable for swimming. After swimming, we started to build sandcastles, listened the sound of the waves, felt the salted taste of sea and enjoyed some special foods.
In the afternoon, we rode around on the road from back of the beach to font of the beach by double- bicycles. That was a wonderful sight. One sight is sea, the others is mountain. It really made me forget everything to relax. And then, we decided climb to Tao Phung mountain. Sightseeing is as beautiful as the other places. So we took many photograph. Standing God’s shoulder is great. We can saw mountain, houses and wide sea. When we climb down the mountain, we bought some souvenir for our friends.
A day go by so fast. I wanted to stay there longer but we had to come back to work the day after. The trip was short but it had a strong impression on me and I had many memories with my friends. We come back Bien Hoa city and felt comfortable after a good holiday.
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In our country, summer holiday is the longest holiday in a year. I often went to sea with my family and my relatives every summer holidays. But last summer, my parents allowed me go to sea with my friends. I had many memories with my friends and it made impression on me.
The trip had seven people; four boys and three girls. We learnt primary school together. So far we have been close friends. We spent three days on holiday. On holiday, we only slept four hours a day and the rest time we went swimming, went sightseeing
At the morning, we got up at half past four o’clock to see sunrise. It was very peaceful and calm in early morning. After that we went swimming. In the evening, we went along seaside. At that time the wave seemed gentler than it was in the afternoon. The later it was, the more people the beach had. Everybody looked happy. We took many photographs and had a lots of sea foods. All of us were indeed happy.
At the last day, there was a small problem with me. I had stomachache. Maybe I was not suitable with sea foods. Fortunately I bought medicine, so I took a medicine and I was ok.
After three days, we came back home. I think it was great time in my life.

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My Summer holiday was fantastic. I went to Istanbul, Turkey. I saw the blue mosque and many historical places. The weather was very nice. I enjoyed the Turkish food it was delicious specially the kebabs and shawirma. I visited many museums. The people were fantastic and friendly. I took the ferry to cross from one side of the city to the other side. I took many pictures with my camera. Trains and buses were really good. My trip was not very cheap as the city was a bit expensive but it was worth it. People did not speak English a lot in Turkey but I managed to get to where I am going. I went to the Turkish tradional public baths. They were very cheap and very relaxing.
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Kỳ nghỉ hè của tôi thật tuyệt vời. Tôi đến Istanbul, Thổ Nhĩ Kỳ. Tôi đã thấy nhà thờ Hồi giáo màu xanh và nhiều địa điểm lịch sử. Thời tiết rất đẹp. Tôi rất thích món ăn Thổ Nhĩ Kỳ, đặc biệt là thịt nướng và thịt nướng. Tôi đã đến thăm nhiều bảo tàng. Mọi người thật tuyệt vời và thân thiện. Tôi đi phà để vượt qua từ một phía của thành phố sang phía bên kia. Tôi chụp nhiều bức ảnh bằng camera của mình. Xe lửa và xe buýt thực sự tốt. Chuyến đi của tôi không phải rất rẻ như thành phố mà là một chút tốn kém nhưng nó đã có giá trị . Mọi người không nói tiếng Anh nhiều ở Thổ Nhĩ Kỳ nhưng tôi đã xoay sở để đến nơi tôi đang đi. Tôi đã đi đến các phòng tắm công cộng truyền thống Thổ Nhĩ Kỳ. Chúng rất rẻ và rất thư giãn.