My best friend is Dang. He is twelwe years old. He lives in Thanh Mien Town. He studying at Nguyen Luong Bang secondary school. He is class 6A1. He and I have known each other since elementary school. He is tall and fat. He is kind and creative. He likes travelling and reading a book. He is hooby watching TV. It's great that I got to know him

My best friend's name is Terrence. He is 13 years old. We met each other on the first day at secondary school. He was my classmate and my first friend there. Terrence is really close to me because we live in the same neighbourhood and we usually meet up in the school yard after school. He is so clever and wise. I like him because he is friendly, careful and he never screams or yells at me. I'm really happy to have Terrence as my best friend.

"When the world is so complicated, the simple gift of friendship is within all of our hands."

I'm sure that everyone has his or her own best mate, and I am also lucky enough to have a very good friend. Among my friends, the one I cherish the most is Han.

Han is a small girl with black straight hair. She is 12 like me and very smart. I think that's the reason why she's the class president, although the boys don't like her very much. They think Han is very dry and has a condescending attitude because she's the class president, but with me, she's friendly, kind,  funny and always helps me when I need. She is sociable, too. She has a lot of friends. We have a lot of things in common, such as we love the same band, food and books. Her forte is English, Math, Literature, Han was always on top when we had the exams. But there are some negative things about her too, like she sometimes cheats during the exam; she is a person who sheds tears easily,...

We are classmates so we talked every day in school. We often talked about lessons, favorite bands, happenings in class.

Sometimes, I feel so lucky because I had a very good friend like her. We have the same age, same hobbies, same forte, same thoughts,... so she is my best friend. I'll be transferring schools next year so I won't be able to see her again. I will miss her so much.

My best friend's name is Vu. He's the same age as me, 17 years old. We've known each other since middle school, when we were in 6th grade. When I was in middle school, I made many friends. but only Vu is my best friend. He was very gentle and interested in helping me. If there is something sad, the two of us confided in each other, he studied very well and often accompanied me to study. , he also buys food for me, even though we are grown up, we are still very close. What I like most about him is his personality and personality, there are times when we are angry but the first person to make up is always him, I always have to study for the national team and come home late but he always waits for me. soon or late. He is a person who always cares and shares when there is a problem. When sad, the two often confide in each other and find a way to overcome. When I'm sick, I still try to go to school, but my best friend still cares and buys me food... he's a very nice person and that's all. Things I like about him.

In middle school, I didn't have many friends, because my classmates were pretty bad and I couldn't fit in with that. My best friend is Minh Ha - we knew each other when we were in primary school. Actually, now she has gone to Russia with her family and hasn't returned yet. She started studying at my school when her family moved to Vietnam. When I first met Minh Ha, I thought she was a foreigner because she has a half-Russian face (because her mother is Russian). She has been a great friend to me. Whenever I was sad, Ha always listened and comforted me. I loved spending time with her. But one day in April of the 5th grade, she told me that her family would go back to Russia for some personal business. At the time, I was really sad but I didn't know what to say - because I knew that sooner or later she would return to Russia. Now it has been a year since I last met Ha, but beautiful memories of her are still in my mind.

Mong cô nhận xét ạ (꒪꒳꒪)

My friend is Minh. He's 12 years old. He has black short hair. I usually meet he, but we can't because Covid 19 is very dangerous . So we meet only. We met in 2nd grade and we in the same class. We study together until grade 5. I like he because he's clever, kind and helpful.

A friendship is very important for everyone, especially me. During my life, I have had many friends. Now I want to tell you about my best friend. His name is Lien Ai .He is a good, kind (and very lovely) person. He supports to me, helps me a lot when I have problems. I love him so much. But we didn't met each other, but I am sure that, if we were in the same school, we will be closer. We've had many memories, we met when we were in hoc24, we have grown to be best friend. When I was sad, he was the first one who encouraged me. When I'm in troubles, he is the most helpful. He isnot only my friend, but also my relative. He supports me in bad times and good times. And he always believes in me, I feel lucky when being his friend. I love him so much.

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My best friend is Dang. He is twelwe years old.

       Twelwe=>twelve

He lives in Thanh Mien Town. He studying at

         Studying=> is studying

 Nguyen Luong Bang secondary school. He is class 6A1.

   Class 6A1=> in class 6A1

He and I have known each other since elementary school. He is tall and fat. He is kind and creative. He likes travelling and reading a book.

A book=> books

He is hooby watching TV.

He is=> his

It's great that I got to know him

thanks

bản dịch kiểu: Tôi sống khá khép kín nên nhiều người xem tôi là người lập dị. Khi đi học, cháu hầu như không giao lưu, vui chơi (...)^{rút ngắn bớt*} Những học sinh giỏi trong lớp coi thường những người như tôi, nhưng cô ấy rất khác với họ. Hải Anh rất ân cần, tận tình giúp đỡ em những điều em chưa hiểu, không chỉ học giỏi mà em còn rất giỏi thể thao. Hải Anh là mẫu người luôn được mọi người ngưỡng mộ nhưng cô chưa bao giờ nghĩ mình là thần tượng! Luôn ở bên cạnh tôi khi tôi vui, khi buồn. Có lẽ điều tôi thích nhất ở cô ấy là tính hài hước, khi tôi buồn cô ấy chỉ nói 2, 3 câu chuyện cười khiến tôi cười không ngớt. Động viên tôi khi tôi buồn và chia sẻ niềm vui của tôi, nó như một giấc mơ!

tự hỏi ''cháu'' là đứa nào? 

em viết chưa hay lắm

Ko sao cảChỉnh sửa lại một chút là đc👍

Ahhh mik xl trl nhầm chỗ ( ≧Д≦)

I didn't have many friends in middle school because my classmates were pretty bad and I couldn't fit in with that. My best friend is Minh Ha - we knew each other when we were in primary school. Actually, now she has gone to Russia with her family and hasn't returned yet. She started studying at my school when her family moved to Vietnam. When I first met Minh Ha, I thought she was a foreigner because she has a half-Russian face (because her mother is Russian). She has been a great friend to me. Whenever I was sad, Ha always listened and comforted me. I loved spending time with her. But one day in April of the 5th grade, she told me that her family would go back to Russia for some personal business. At the time, I was really sad but I didn't know what to say - because I knew that sooner or later she would return to Russia. Now it has been a year since I last met Ha, but beautiful memories of her are still in my mind.

xl nhak trl nhầm chỗ (╥_╥)(╥_╥)

hahaha How did you post it wrong place

:/ quên business ko có số nhiều

IamnotThanhTrung cười j ಠ_ಠ

Uk vì mik ngu đc chưa :/ 

ngu dốt :)

lovely answer!

Fantastic friendship, nice answer!

My friend is Minh. He's 12 years old. He has short black hair. I usually see him quite often, but these days we can't because the Covid-19 is very dangerous. So we're just able to make phone call or video calls. We have known each other since the 2nd grade thanks to being in the same class. We studied together until the 5th grade. I like him because he is smart, kind and helpful.

lovely idea, 

let's pay attention to the above piece of writing that has been corrected!

Thank you:3

I live a rather closed life, so many people see me as an eccentric person. When I go to school, I hardly interact and play, but just sit at the desk, making my friends more and more alienated. Entering the chosen class was a difficult challenge, many people even thought that I was from the countryside so I looked down on it, I was used to it until she appeared. She changed my life a lot, made me open up and made many new friends. So today I want to tell you about that special person! Her name is Hai Anh, she is in the same class as me, we are both 13 years old. I met her at the beginning of 6th grade, while in class, Hai Anh came and took the initiative to get to know me. I think she's just like everyone else I've met so I don't really care but just say yes and yes. The good students in the class looked down on people like me, but she was very different from them. Hai Anh is very considerate, dedicated to helping me with what I do not understand, not only is she good at studying, but she is also excellent at sports. Hai Anh is the type of person who is always admired by everyone but she never thought of herself as an idol! Always by my side when I'm happy, sad. Perhaps what I like most about her is her sense of humour, when I'm sad she only says 2 or 3 jokes that make me laugh non-stop. Cheering me up when I'm sad and sharing my happiness, it's like a dream!

hình như hơi dài!

My friend is ❤Gin Icharu_senpai❤(you just need to know his nik name) . He's 11 years old. He has black short hair. I usually meet him and there was a time when he likes me but i just want we're friends so we have been friends until now .We still play game together and have beautiful memories . i said he can be my younger brother and he is very happy.we always share our story together.i love him so much!!!^{this is just a close friendship}

very nice answer with wide range of relevant vocabs and grammar structures

good storyteller

well-organized piece of writing

good job!

the writing clearly presents a developed response

various structures

a wide range of vocabulary has been used fluently and flexibly

but, what do you mean by saying: "what I like most about him is his personality and personality"?

beautiful memory

pleasant piece of writing

presents a clear story

uses a range of cohesive devices

uses a variety of complex structures

good job!

thank you ! :'')

A friendship is very important for everyone, especially me. During my life, I have had many friends. Now I want to tell you about my best friend. His name is Lien Ai .He is a good, kind (and very lovely) person. He supports (không có to) me, helps me a lot whenever (hay hơn khi dùng "bất cứ khi nào") I have problems. I love him so much.

Even though we haven't met each other, I am sure that, if we were in the same school, we would (câu điều kiện loại 2) be closer. We've had many memories, we have known each other since we were in hoc24, we have become best friends.

When I was sad, he was the first one to encourage me. When I'm in troubles, he is the most helpful. He isnot only my friend, but also my relative. He supports me through all the ups and downs (cách nói này hay hơn đó em). And he always believes in me, I feel lucky when being his friend.

I adore him so much. (một cách dùng khác cho "I love him" cho đỡ lặp em nhé)

Pretty good idea and good storyteller. Nice answer! 

I have also seen many articles you wrote about this friend.

Hope you have beautiful memories on Hoc24.vn!

Very nice and emotional post!

manages all aspects of cohesion pretty well

wide range of vocab and structures

It's okay to be long, and it would be even better if the writing were separated into smaller paragraphs so that we can easily folow the story.